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Space
selection was very good and challenging
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Try not make excuses for presentation problems and move on because
your format was still very affective
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Use the phrase “once again” less often (just nerves…we
still love you!)
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Slide 12 should highlight the exterior (beyond the atrium) as
well as the lobby as currently shown
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Integrating daylighting into the capital market was not quite
clear as to how that was going to happen and how much impact
it may have on your design
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Slide 24 – a person standing between the two pendants
(as shown) would not be lit.
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Downlight
beams are overlapping but pendant fixtures are not…make
sure rendering reinforces what you are saying is going to be
done (ceiling uniformity and beams), but overall technique of
rendering was done well
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Downlights being glare sources…were downlights glary because
wrong downlight selection was made, or did you not like the
ceiling littered with holes because of so many downlights…maybe
further investigation will determine the route of the problem
Some areas (i.e. auditorium) may not have enough light in the
space with the elimination of the downlights
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Make sure people taking notes in the auditorium will still have
enough task light even if the daylight component of the room
is not present due to night time or shades
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Look at entire composition of the façade instead of focusing
on individual architectural elements to tie all aspects of the
elevation together so the entire building makes one statement
instead of individual elements making separate statements
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At entrance…draw more attention to the entrance doors
with light so it’s clearer as to the means of entry
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Verbiage of concepts may be somewhat unclear as to the purpose/goals
of the concept
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Flynn model was a little unclear as to how it pertains to the
design…good way to explain what you want to do in the
space, but explain more about what the Flynn model is and why
the Flynn model is valid or significant in lighting design
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Pendants in entrance lobby seem to cut/segment ceiling due to
their orientation…rotate pendants 90 degrees to open up
the ceiling or change fixture so pendants don’t lower
the perception of the ceiling
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Go more in depth with certain explanations assuming the client/audience
is not familiar with any aspect of the building since they are
not as familiar with things as you are
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Reverse slide order of renderings so that more conceptual renderings
(sketches) come before more refined concepts (photoshop renderings)
to progress in your presentation properly
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Add an overall exterior rendering to show your concept and how
powerful it will be
